Aiva

Yeah- I knew I heard that name before, but I couldn't figure out where. I think I might change it later. Thanks for the comments!!

Thanks so much for the input! I'm glad you all like this one better. I wasn't sure about the spacing, but now that it's been pointed out, I'll be sure ...

She’s cute; I approve!” Kaden stated, rubbing his hands together. “Hey, not so fast there, Kaden. You know the rules. This is work, not free time,” Ronan stated warningly. Kaden ...

Thank you so much everyone!! I'm so happy people actually like it! Heh, how's that for being confident?... Once I finish the revised and finished copy of the first draft, ...

Yeah, exactly. It's a cliche, and it's been used millions of times :smt010 Hehe.

Thanks for your thoughts!! I'm sort of excited to see what people have to say about this. It's going to be hard: Some people like fast-paced, some don't. But for ...

Yes, yes, I'm aware of everything extremely terrible in my icky poem. It's supposed to be indistinguishable. It was something I spent about 5 minutes on, counting looking for things ...

Thanks for the input! And I understand where you're all coming from. Next time, when I'm seriously thinking about writing a poem, your suggestions a comment will be the first ...

Yeah, I just wrote this, for no apparent reason. It was something where I locked myself up in my room, grabbed a notebook, and jotted down anything that came out ...

No, I thank you very much for it!! I asked people to be harsh. Like I said, I haven't done any planning with this story at all. The characters appearances ...

Thanks for all the CC, it's very much appreciated!! This is still in the editing process. In fact, the second piece is my second draft, and I'm probably going to ...

Even worse 2-draft prologue!! Eep. Hopefully, you'll like my new one better... Sorry for the inconvenience, everyone!! And thanks for the input, it's given me some great ideas about my ...

Ahh, thank you!! Yeah, the prologue is more of an info-dumpy thing than a "start of the adventure!!" prologue, which is in chapter one. So basically, cut a few things, ...

Sounds good! I'll post the revised one again. IS a bit short. I noticed that when I was posting, the second verse was REALLY tiny. =D Thanks for the input!

........Crap. She does?? Great... Yeah, I do that a lot. Hopefully, it'll change over time, and my writing will get better...>.