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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Fading

    This one is so touching, It's like I can hear your voice whispering in my ears while saying this lines. For me, the overall thought and the content is great. ...

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Self Acceptance

    Hello, I find the overall concept good but there are some rough edges that has room for improvements. The way of breaking the lines also gives a rather monotonous tone ...

    Sep 4, 2017


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