Aianarie

Nice lyrics! (shouldn't this be in the lyrics section though?) Definitely not very country-ish, but still good. To me it seems more like rock or maybe soft rock.

Thank you, everyone, for your comments. I have taken your suggestions into consideration for future reference. I will mention though that I kind of have my own idea of structure. ...

Nice work! This poem has an intriguing look and sound to it. Remember to double-check your grammar and spelling!

Hmm, nice poem, the emotion is captured well. I think you should make it longer...extend it! I love sad poems like this when they are really long and kind of ...