Aeros

Almost spit milk everywhere when you spoke about tearing off the band-aid being painful.

Good idea, I might do that, actually. This was really written as more of an aside for myself, and Im kind of happy someone else found it relatable. The rating ...

Nice poem! It really made me laugh a lot. Is the ending supposed to be about accepting candy from strangers? Just wondering, but even if it isn't it's still nice.

It should be Hades', the S at the end makes it its own plural.

Ive got a feeling you just read too much into it, haha.

Hey, nice story! Nothing I can find wrong with it. If you were worried about the humorous tone, I dont think you need to be. After 3 chapters of seriousness, ...

Ill keep that in mind for future poems :)

All that being said, with a second read-through, I am realizing that I come up on "option 3" rather quickly, and with little pretense. Ill fix that when I have ...

Poetry is not my strong suit. I will say that much, haha. You are right, these are thoughts of mine I had written down, however I purposefully left blanks so ...

The mistakes that the narrator made were supposed to be given a sort of "poetic inflection", meaning that it could be whatever the reader wants it to be. It's a ...

I should also mention that his character, as well as the game they play, I think, were suggestions from my sister, haha.

I should also mention that my use of Mushi-Ken was to attribute qualities to the throws, instead of using Rock Paper Scissors. And besides, this guy is an experienced swindler ...

Normally, nervous/antisocial people are often depicted as slugs, frogs are opportunists that try to get what they can but not be overconfident in a risky situation, and snakes are people ...

Believe me, leaving that in was a tough decision. In the end, the idea was that his character would be explained further in other parts of the story, if/when I ...

No problem! Its a really good story, honestly, and you could even make more stories about these two, or other things kind of similar. Maybe another family of emotions or ...