AdventurerDaniel

I liked this but honestly you departed from you rhyme scheme while honestly I' a very anti-rhyme scheme kind of guy if you given yourself a certain one I wouldn't ...

I find it shocking that no one has reviewed this yet. I enjoyed reading it while at some points it rhymed it had no definite rhyme scheme and quite frankly ...

I loved this poem it's interesting to see how the writer observed the occurrence. Instead of how most would respond you responded with a coll calculation of the situation. You ...

I loved that it was so subtle forget depth forget any other pretense it's perfect. The character's point of view expressed an interesting kind of fascination mixed with disgust.Then to ...

Devilishly amusing you simply must get it published and the thin allusions to breaking the forth wall but at the same time keeping it. I would have Juliet played by ...

I liked this if you made it more coherent it would make an amusing monologue please read mine and comment that would make me happy but that's aside from the ...

Wow that is the first word that comes to mind that level of plot twist blew my mind totally works though while it doesn't make sense that Midna or Zelda ...

It's fascinating to watch the story unfold interestingly absorbing a brief glimpse into the private life of someone like going through their dirty laundry you feel so bad for that ...

I enjoyed reading it while I believe vampires are overplayed in the modern media and in books it's very well written. I'm not sure how well I can critique your ...