AdmiralKat

Wolf is my best friend and we love playing little jokes on each other. I confirmed to her when I wrote this that I was just joking.

Okay Dinakins. Let me review your review. Thanks for the grammar. That always helps. She can just brush it off but I can make she more nervous. She can hear ...

Thanks so much for the review. It is really helpful in helping me find out what I need to be more descriptive on. I will be sure to take your ...

Thank you for helping me figure about the problems about grammar because I sure need help with that. I realized just now how much my tenses were suffering.(weird sentence there). ...

Thank you so much for reviewing, this will help me A LOT! I am probably going to rewrite this and expand. I think I could turn this into a novel. ...

For this story, I may say, I was a bit rushed because I wanted to post this for free. In my word document, the texting actually looks like texting, with ...

I love this. I played this game.

The thing is my mom loves cliche stuff. XD

okay thanks!

How can I make it less "blocky"? Can you tell me an example in where I can improve? Thanks!

Thanks! I must ask, how can I improve my conclusion because I am really bad at them and I want to do better in the future. Got any tips? Also ...

I think this is genius! I am the best writer ever! :D