AdmiralKat

Thanks niteowl for clarifying that! I really appreciate it!

I agree with clever. Work to give valuable feedback to the writer to help them beautify the world with their writing. It's okay to give your personal opinion on the ...

She spent 5 1/2 hours on it. 0.o I be blessed with the Wolfe's grace. Ever since she submitted it, I've been reading it. Just finished reading and editing the ...

Thank you Wolfe for spending all this time on me. I

Thank you so much for the helpful review (finally)! I'm just a little confused on your comment on her narration and memories. Are you suggesting it to be like Scrooge ...

So just to answer some of things that you said, the reason why I said she couldn't "see" light is because she is blind and I have to emphasize that ...

Basically the "room" in the beginning is where she is a coma. She can see in the 2nd scene because she is not yet blind and because it's a memory. ...

Thanks for the comments on the tenses!

If you really want to take it that far... you could find it as an example of satire which mocks how serious poets take poems when really poems can be ...

Yes! If you could make me some Russian food, I would adore him! :3 *All my family is Russian/Ukrainian*

It's too many syllables for all that you want. :P It's a haiku. Also, the last line doesn't HAVE to imply they said yes, they could be sitting there shocked ...

*clever

Cause it's clear and I don't go around and ask people to read it.

This comment or the poem?

Thanks for such a great review! :D It's been like 1/2 a year since I posted a work and when I wrote this, I was like 0-o, this is my ...