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Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 23.
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review. Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. So, you have given me the task to review the perfect piece and you expect ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 22
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. Raven, raven, raven. Where is your use of spell checker? I think that you have ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Printer
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. Somethings that just are bugging me when I read this are organization and capitalization. You ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Keeping it real-Chapter 1
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. My main concern is that you don't have a good setting for the last part. ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The weirdo scientists and the submerged people: A graphic story starring Sims people.
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. When I look at the part where the character are surprised, it just looks so ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Deleted #5
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. Okay, I had to just point this line out because of references. @Wolfare1 Look at ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Territorial -CHAPTER 2 = No pain no game
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... You have many grammatical errors and what I advice is to put this work in Office Word ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 15:
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... You have some paragraphs that are way too short, they need to be combined with other paragraphs ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Promiscuity (attempt at punk-poetry)
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I'm here for the poetry exchange thingy and I must say I'm glad to be reading such ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: A Poem About Love
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I really like this perspective that you show right here, it is really unique and I quite ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: A Song Named Alice Chapter 7
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here! I'm kind off confused on what's happening here, that's why this may have not gotten as many ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Eighteen II
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here. I think that I really like this story. The way that you should continue this is by ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: A Song Named Alice Chapter 6
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... You need to separate this piece into two parts. It's just too long and that's why people ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: The Bully. Chapter 2.
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... NITPICK: "He was the one who had roped me in to this and now he couldn't even ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 7: Momster from Hell
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I am not quite understanding the plot right here, this sounds like this could be a great ...
Aug 8, 2014