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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 2
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here! When I was reading this, I got really confused on some of the times on who was ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1
Hello! KatyaElefant here for a review! I know this work has like 12 reviews but you need 13 reviews so it can be extra lucky! I think I'm going to ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Monoceros (Edited)
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! I'm so happy to finally be reviewing some works. You are my second review since half a year! Let us begin! ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: To be a Plebe: Part 1
Hello! KatyaElefant here for her first review since September! September! That's like...HALF A YEAR! So you get the honor of getting a review from a rusty reviewer. >,< Oh and ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Sage and The Sick-O's// Chapter Four
Hello! KatyaElefant here for her first review of the day(month/couple of months)! So sorry if my reviewing is a little bit rusty. :P I have to say before I even ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Experiment 016
Hello! KatyaElefant for her first(maybe even last because I'm lazy like that...) review of the day. Happy Review Day! :D I hope it's great! Anyways, let's see what we have ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Detached
Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review. I'm in life skills class right now and so I decided to review something because I have no homework and I don't wanna talk ...
Sep 16, 2014 -
Re: "The Ones Crafted by You"
Hello! Katya here for another review! Happy Review Week! Let's see what we have here. When I read this, I immediately thought that you needed to separate this poem into ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Sneak Peak... VOTE!
Hello! KatyaElefant here for a review of your survey because why not? You posted this as a work and that's awesome! I shall be reviewing for Review week! Let's see ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: The House of Dracula Act 1 Scene 3
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. When you have people doing something, first piece of advise is to italicize it. That ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow - Chapter Eight
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. I look at this and right off the bat I see that it's really long. ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Nine
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. You have some rather large paragraphs, especially towards the end. I advise that you split ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Border of Light, Six (2)
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. Now I don't know if you put this through a spell checker, I advise that ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 7
Hello! KatyaElefant here for a review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have right here... I think that you could shorten your fourth to last paragraph because you have ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Boy In The Shadows: Chapter 2
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day!Let's see what we have here. You use the word, too incorrectly in several cases but that's the only grammatical error that ...
Aug 31, 2014