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Re: A War With No End Chapter 6
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here... Again, the same problem, you need to organize this into smaller paragraphs. It just helps the reader be ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: A War With No End Chapter 5
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here... 0-0 I don't know what to say, it's just one big block paragraph XD Okay, to put it ...
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Re: The Things I did for you....
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here... NITPICKS: "And your voice was wonderful when you sung a song" I feel that it would make more ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: .
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here... I am not going to say anything at all against this piece because it's all true. It's kind ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal Book 2 Prolouge
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here. NITPICK: "She threw a rock into the police man(')s face," There is a minor grammar error here. ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: -=The Sorting Hat=-
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here. NITPICKS: "The school errupts with applause, mainly from your house," Just a minor spelling error. Erupts is ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Gooey
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here. There is just one thing that is piercing my brain, when I read this. You don't have ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: True Love
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy mini-review day! Let's see what we have here. (Why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? What a shame.... Goes to review it for the ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Mini-Review Day! :D Let's do this thing! The first line: This is so true. Sometimes, for any piece, to get readers to read ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Nighttime and Morning
Hello! KatyaElefant here for her last review of the day! I'm too busy for life so I'm going to stop here! Oh and Happy Review Day! Let's see what you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Invisibl
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. This reminds me about an introduction that I wrote for one of my stories but ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Life and Death
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here! First off, I remember seeing this in your other piece and I am happy that ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: "Queen Elsa's anger issues" with Olaf.
Hello! KatyaElefant here with another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. I'm going to go in order of what I think of each sentence/sentences that you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Soarin' With One Direction
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here! This is a really short Short story. XD I am personally not a fan of ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Peace (life through my lens)
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here. You did a great job with this essay. Quite inspiring, as a matter of fact. ...
Jul 27, 2014