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Re: Out of the Rain
Top of the morning Edelweiss its me Adleweiss! I've already read this before but I suppose it wouldn't hurt to review it. In the third paragraph you try to describe ...
Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: What Happened to the Dragons?
Hey, Adleweiss here, and your short story was probably as magical as possible! It's described very well and is very creative, and there weren't many imperfections that couldn't be fixed ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: A Deal with the Devil
Hi Ashley123, I'm Adelweiss! And I'm here for a review. This is my first one, and I chose yours because "A Deal with the Devil" sounded like it would be ...
Jun 12, 2016
