AdamHomer

David didn’t really know who this person was, yet felt the benevolence of him. He didn’t know what it was that compelled him to do so, but he followed the ...

Incredible sense of history with Ashmore. Sense of place and size is key when crafting fictional locales. Work on internal though more though. Example. How do the 536 faces of ...

I agree with Midnight, real dialogue heavy. I am too, and it can do wonders when juxtaposed with internal thought process. Example Liam attitude toward Omar and how he actually ...

[quote="salsashanno"] Tell me what you think, I'm not much of a poet so I'd like some feedback! But please who ? Is yet again the question. Are you really the ...

I'm almost petrified by how good that was for someone of any age (let alone 13) You have your own original mythology that is captivating Strong Prose, Hurano. :)

I admire your honesty, it is refreshing to see a piece not polluted by stressed metaphores. But it is almost too simplistic, I think if you widen your vocabulary you ...