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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The messenger

    Good evening. When writing it, I envision the entity to be a sort of messenger for God, as the poem has heavy religious tone. The messenger itself is not inherently ...

    Feb 21, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The messenger

    Hello and thank you for the review. You guess correctly by thinking the grammar was because of the software. I stopped writing in Google docs because the red underlines when ...

    Feb 21, 2022
  • Short Story » Theatre, General Re: Last Dance

    Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate all constructive criticism, especially when they%u2019re as polite and helpful as yours. Many of the points you made would make for good changes ...

    Dec 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: An ode to love lost

    Hi and thank you for the review. As far as stanzas, I could figure out how to do them when copying and pasting it here. The lines kept getting grouped ...

    Dec 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Theatre, General Re: Last Dance

    Hi Rosewood! Thank you very, very much for the very kind remarks. Would you believe me if I told you this was my first time writing a full story? Firstly, ...

    Dec 20, 2021


Just because you don't feel like a hero in your own story, doesn't mean you're not a hero in someone else's.
— Tenyo