AceassinOfTheMoon

hi~ The sunset, already made early by the winter, was hastened by the sun disappearing behind the tall peaks as Leilan and Kaja arrived at the Plaza of Claws. The ...

hey what's up we're gonna pretend it hasn't been forever since I reviewed the last parts of this Marius wouldn’t even notice it if he did, since the seats didn’t ...

what's up She chuckled. “Do I actually need this?” like I said in my last review, I understand that Mireya's a chaotic dumbass, but lines like this make her come ...

good fricking time of day my friend, I'm distracting myself from real life by blessing you with a review today “If it’s Rationale magic, would that be unusual enough for ...

wow, look, back to review this again, who could've guessed~ “Thank you,” Dawn replied, closing the doors behind them. “And sorry for the bother.” Kasumi had the grace to stay ...

Surprise, it's me again~ Ooh, new people! Love the instant characterization of Dawn and Kasumi. With a single paragraph about each of them, we know who these people are. Not ...

oh hi, it's me again~ magic time magic time magic time!! I love reading about magic systems and finding out how that all works and you're doing a fairly good ...

oh hi there~ You've already got a lot of good critiques for this so I'm probably not going to say much, I'm really only doing this because it feels awkward ...

HI THERE I'M HERE TO REVIEW "Coryn, I don't know how the hell you saved this bird," Austin repeated for the millionth time, "but this is the most succulent, tastiest ...

YEET IT'S TAKEN ME A WHILE BUT I'M HERE The drive to Jackson had been slower than Coryn had expected it to be, and much less energy-efficient than he was ...

hlaskdjflkdsjfldksjf TWO reviews in the same night??? look at me go Hi!! I'm here!! I love this!!!!!! Starting off strong with giving us a date and place for this! Not ...

hlkadsfj anxiety go yeet let's do this !!!! Amazing!!!!!! I absolutely love the way you've written Deserae in this. You've got her almost spot-on, honestly. Also, I have made this ...

Hey there! I hope you're having a great day :) I really like this! The imagery is really vivid and the entire thing is very relatable. The words you chose ...