Abocreature

Yay! The beginning of love! This story is awesome! Thank you for writing this! I'm gonna be reading more vampire romances from now on! There were only a few grammatical ...

What kind of girl loses her virginity on her 14th birthday? There are so many grammatical errors in this that it is hard to read. Everything moved too fast. It ...

I liked this story! There are only a few things I would like to point out: ((OOC: This is my first ever attempt at romantic fiction, so feel free to ...

This is exiting! I can't wait to read more! There were just a couple errors and comments I would like to make, though: Prologue "Are you ready, love?" I asked ...

Awe, sad but true. Very good once again! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love how you express emotions and make it very realistic, it's almost as ...

I really like this story! I said it before and I'll say it again, I don't read vampire romances but this is really good! I can't wait until some more ...

Good job! Great story! I don't usually read vampire romances, but I like this one! I like how you made her feel sorrow for her past. And all the details ...

Ooh, interesting. I really like this story so far, please continue to post it. VERY few grammatical errors, good job! Like I said in the first chapter: If you have ...

Still some grammatical errors in this, but it seemed like less of them. I like how you describe her feelings and how she's (in my opinion) denying that she likes ...

I like this story, and I'm interested to see what happens. There were a few minor problems, though. 1. There were a few Grammar errors. Some sentences had missing commas. ...