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Abhipsa

Abhipsa

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: We sit on the driftood

    It's simply beautiful! You cannot be just so heartless to call it awful..!

    Wed Jan 06, 2016 8:22 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: An Easy Goodbye

    Well, if you feel that it was childish, then that would certainly break the emotion

    Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:09 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: King Of the Clouds

    The second stanza's last three lines are not so clear because you have described sleep to be death's cousin. But why? There is no evil associated to sleep for the ...

    Thu Dec 31, 2015 4:32 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: One Night in a Forest

    Before anyone reviews, please read this!!!!!! I forgot to mention it in the poem. This is about a man who remembers the old house where he used to live as ...

    Tue Dec 29, 2015 4:18 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: It Was Said Casually!

    It was a pleasure :)

    Tue Dec 29, 2015 6:38 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Ship and the Storm

    Oh, so this is the poem you were talking about. Yes it is similar to mine, but non specific in nature and more adventurous. It is much better rhymed. The ...

    Mon Dec 28, 2015 4:23 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one

    If I did, then it stands to my credit

    Sat Dec 26, 2015 3:19 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    Oh. If only we had been friends then... :(

    Fri Dec 25, 2015 6:39 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    Yeah. You have been here?

    Thu Dec 24, 2015 4:17 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait II

    Thank you for all the compliments and for reading my work :)

    Thu Dec 24, 2015 4:16 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    In India too. Bhuvneshwar :)

    Thu Dec 24, 2015 6:06 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one

    It was my pleasure. I felt that the parts about the guy telling his story again and the reactions of others was a bit much too descriptive and the part ...

    Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:08 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    And thanks for such generous comments :)

    Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:01 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    I too can't stay awake after 11. I too wake up early at 4 or 5. Well, by the way, where do u live?

    Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:00 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Portrait

    Same here. Exams over and working on completing the practical records now. Its become a busy life...

    Tue Dec 22, 2015 6:48 am


"I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
— Lewis Carroll