Abhipsa

It's simply beautiful! You cannot be just so heartless to call it awful..!

Well, if you feel that it was childish, then that would certainly break the emotion

The second stanza's last three lines are not so clear because you have described sleep to be death's cousin. But why? There is no evil associated to sleep for the ...

Before anyone reviews, please read this!!!!!! I forgot to mention it in the poem. This is about a man who remembers the old house where he used to live as ...

It was a pleasure :)

Oh, so this is the poem you were talking about. Yes it is similar to mine, but non specific in nature and more adventurous. It is much better rhymed. The ...

If I did, then it stands to my credit

Oh. If only we had been friends then... :(

Yeah. You have been here?

Thank you for all the compliments and for reading my work :)

In India too. Bhuvneshwar :)

It was my pleasure. I felt that the parts about the guy telling his story again and the reactions of others was a bit much too descriptive and the part ...

And thanks for such generous comments :)

I too can't stay awake after 11. I too wake up early at 4 or 5. Well, by the way, where do u live?

Same here. Exams over and working on completing the practical records now. Its become a busy life...