Abhipsa

Thanks for the review! I will surely try to space the dialogues. :)

Thank you so much for this lovely review :)

Thank you so much for a wonderful review

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! Thank you for pointing out the mistake :)

Thank you so much for the review. It was really very helpful. I'll definitely work on improving it.

Well, then I shall say that you have got an unique style indeed! Keep that up. :)

Thank you so much for the review! I will try to improve. As to the appearances, I have described some in the first chapter:)

Thanks and same to you! :)

Sure! And it is really a good thing that you can describe the emotions so well! :)

Hey, this is really awesome. I have nothing to say about it - it is beyond words. So I'm just leaving a like.

Good luck for that. Will look forward to it. :)

Hey, Abhipsa here for a review :) Before starting, I want to tell you whatever I write are solely my own perceptions and you don't need to be too serious ...

Thank you :)

Its okay. I understand what you are going through. No problem. You are Eros for me and everyone :)

Thanks for the review and the like :) Actually this poem is continuing. You should have read The Portrait I before reading this part II