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Re: Summer Love
This was good. It was confusing to me at points, but still very good. I like how you put it about love in the summer time. It has a nice ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Faces
This was really good. I can see where your coming from...I'm a model. It was kind of flat though. I would really want to see more drama put into it. ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Don't Know What Love Is
Oh wow...this is great! I loved it, from the end to beginning and beginning to end. I have been through this type of thing too. And I was in so ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: I can make it better
Well that made me think twice before I walk off from my boyfriend. It was good. I liked it. Really and truely we should all be 13 or over so ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: For All the Murdered in the Cold Ground
Ok that was good and gross at the same time. :? I thought some of it had a little humor to it. You did have some grammer mistakes, such as ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden
That was great. I am new to the whole website so I am not sure what its suppose to be like. Oh well in my head that was so beautiful. ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
It was very good. I wished it had more creative description. I hoped in the future it will be more suspenceful. I loved the ending parts though. They acted like ...
Nov 25, 2008