AbTheCrab

This is a beautful, yet depressing, metaphor for life. I love it! I like 'I lost myself in me,' and 'they fall down, each and every one of them.' It's ...

Thank you! I wrote this in Microsoft Word and I copy and pasted it, and then many of the spaces just kind of went away. I tried to fix it ...

Thank you so much! I'll try to update as often as possible. Thanks for the suggestion, but for now I'll stick with whatever I'm doing now. Thanks again! :)

This is an interesting poem. I loved when you use descriptive words, it really creates a solid mental image of what you are writing about. You are very imaginative, I ...