AWritersFantasy

Oh yay! THANK YOU! I'm SO excited for this. ^______^ I'll download them right now and let you know if I have any issues with the downloads. :D

I think that one of the stronger aspects of your writing is the writin gof emotional pieces Awww, thanks. :D I'm glad I actually did that part right. Someone at ...

Okay, here's the next half of the chapter. It's a short scene, so there won't be as much scrolling. [pre]The two outcasts walked silently along the path in the field ...

Slight update: I ended up changing a part in the very last scene in this chapter, which ended up adding more emotion for Kaliyah, the main character. The change is ...

...Really? I think it was just a random name I chose without looking it up or anything, though I don't remember for sure. Ha!

Awesome. Also, I meant to say that I don't know a whole lot about the character s .

Ha, this is pretty cool! I wish I could come up with songs that would work for Archer's Legend, but sadly I haven't been able to. x.x Which sucks.

I'm not good at world building. I tried it before I started writing this story, and I'm just not that great at it. That's why there are so little details ...

Whatever. The bottom line is that it is NOT historical fantasy. The only way I meant that it's a "baby" dream is that it's small and there isn't much to ...

"Stench" might not have been the best word choice, but I would expect that if there's enough dust then it would be extremely obvious that that's what she's smelling. And ...

I should note that I didn't intentionally skp the stuff with the setting; I have a hard time trying to describe places, clothing, and rooms with lots of description. I ...

Thank you again! And as for your spacing concerns... I am not too worried about that. Any book I pick up they don't start new sentences for dialogue. It should ...

Eh, I forgot about the town's name. Three "K" names isn't that bad, though. Yeah, I'll probably end up doing that once I get this next chapter written.

Neat wording. Lol, thanks. And I think you should try to put more emotion into Kaliyah's meeting with Erabus. Yeah, that's what a lot of others who've read this have ...

Ooooh, I liked this. I don't have anything to add, other than that I noticed you put "aistlin" instead of "Jaistlin" at some point. I'm looking forward to reading more. ...