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same as "rarwr?" good job

i love this one soooo much :lol:

ive got like the next 3 chapters made im just workin on somthin else right now

"The world can surely not go one without them" it should be on not one...but other than that it was perfect...but what or who inspired you to write this cause ...

i really did love that poem it is very emotional

in stead of "breaking oath" write "broken oath" it might make it flow a bit better but all in all i liked it

I am just ging to say this now im bad at grammer...but im working on it:D

its very good nicole i actually knew u were good but i didnt know u were this good

im fine with spelling erik and with all due respect you kinda drowned the story in detail

incase you curious LITs who stumbled apon this site the characters a based on a few of you lits i know stupid right?...but u cant blame me for being inspired ...

"There were an awkward few seconds" i think u meant to say "there was an awkward silencence for a few seconds"

im working on my grammer, and i dont exactley know what country he lives in yet or the time frame for a matter of fact :D

Uhh just puttin it out there but... YOU CAN CRITIQUE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INFACT YOU ARE ENCOURAGED TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I look forward to reading this!

It is coming up ive only written out about 4 chapters and this is the only one ive found time to type up so far.