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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Streeetside Sonnet

    Hi @1nspire! I love this poem! It is simple, yet the message is powerful. I love the rhyming pattern you used and I feel that it contributes to the tone ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Every Laugh

    Hi @1inspire! I really like this poem. Your message is beautiful and definitely made me emotional while I was reading it. I love how the tone of the poem changes ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When the sun rises

    Hi, @FabihaNeera, I just wanted to say that I love your poem and the message that you try to get across to the reader. The way I understand it, you ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    Hi @Leviari, I love this poem! It's short, but the message is extremely powerful. I could definitely feel your emotion as I read it. The first two lines are simple, ...

    May 12, 2019


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