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Re: Neelerry, clean or unclean?
I like the underlying message of corruption and slavery, however there are a lot of aspects of this which could use work. As a speech, it feels very... lyrical. A ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Textbook Love Affair (Teach Me)
The minimalism of this is great. It feels kinda... atmospheric. Like a The 1975 song, although it might not sound like it vocally. However, songs like this usually only work ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Attitude Is Everything
The narrative voice is strong, and poignant, which is great if you're planning a monologue as you say you are. However, there are a few things that just need a ...
Aug 30, 2015