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Hello writer 1204, thank you for the compliments and review. I agree with the things that you brought up and intend to improve on them in my future work. Verb ...

Hello spiritedwolf, don't apologize for being blunt. The whole point of this place is to get constructive criticism. I do appreciate your critic, it will help me become a better ...

Hi again Gymnast 2801, thank you for the link. I will definitely look up more information.

Hello Mr.Brainwasher, thank you for the review. I appreciate the input and the compliment.

Thank you for the review DeathPrince. I'm sorry, if the reason why they kept going over wasn't clear. Like I had told Swarx earlier, I wrote this rather quickly and ...

oops, I accidently posted without finishing my thought. As I was saying, people went over for the business opportunity in hopes of obtaining money for their family.

Hello Swarx, thank you for the review. This was a short story that I wrote in about 15 minutes to pass the time during my break at work, which is ...

Hello Greatking, thank you for your review. I will definitely go over my work more carefully to check for grammatical errors. I also thank you for your constructive criticism as ...

Hello Jyva, thank you for your review. I well definitely go through my stories much closer next time to fix simple errors like spacing. I also apperciate your constructive criticism ...

Thanks for the clarification, the whole guard situation did not take away from the story. You did a great job.