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Re: Rotten - L.A. - Prologue
Thank you! I also noticed the thing with the speech, I will be fixing that shortly.. I've been more careful with it as I am currently writing my first chapter. ...
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Re: Walking Away
I hate that you had to deal with this. I am glad that you left that situation. Also, I completely understand what you mean by just spilling out your emotions ...
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Re: All I could think to say was "You"
That is very true.
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: All I could think to say was "You"
Ah it's alright. This is based off of the events that happened while my other piece is how I felt at that particular moment... I just kinda let myself go ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
You're starting to convince me that I should write a book... Hmm.. I'm considering it. I will say that. I need to make some reviews myself so that I can ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: All I could think to say was "You"
Aww thank you. I wish I could write a book but I always get so distracted.. Plus I have too many ideas. I need one great idea rather than a ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: All I could think to say was "You"
I am! Thank you!
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
Thank you! It is purposely supposed to show this certain moment of desperation.. And yes, as a writer I like to let people interpret the story how they want. But ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
Of course! It'll say accepting, but I don't think theres ever going to be a point when I stop accepting.
Feb 19, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
AAAA THANK YOU! I am so happy commented on this piece. And I am even more glad that you noticed how emotional it truly is. Because I wrote this piece ...
Feb 19, 2024 -
Re: All I could think to say was "You"
I just realized the premise of the situation wasn't that he was with someone else. It was that he liked someone else and was "rejected" in a sense.
Feb 18, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
AAAA I DIDN'T MAKE THE SPACING LIKE THIS. Agh.. I guess that's not the point of this poem anyway. Please ignore the spacing uhh.. Issues. I am currently giving up ...
Feb 17, 2024 -
Re: merciful -- animated
Just wanted to say.. I loved the fact that for the most part this is monochromatic, while the only times we see any other colors are the Judges' gavel, and ...
Feb 17, 2024 - Re: The Tears On My Path Feb 17, 2024
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Re: All I could think to say was "You"
Aww thank you! Surprisingly enough this was made in the "spur of the moment." I'll have more to post.. As soon as I make some reviews myself. And the answer ...
Feb 16, 2024
