AGWilliams

It was Queen of Hearts who chopped people's heads off :p Tim Burton's film got it wrong ;)

Heeyy. I see you're right in that rabbit holes are very much associated with Alice, so maybe I should just say "hole" or "burrow" or something :p as the the ...

This is lovely :) Makes me wanna dig out the stories I wrote as a kid, but then they'll look rubbish compared to this

Thanks for the feedback! I'll get on it. With the dryads, I guess I didn't make it clear they didn't all die, just those the Alder King tried to take ...

Thank you very much for your kind comments :) I'm working on all of your suggestions as I speak :)

Teachers are hot. I totally never act up so I'll get detention to spend more time with them ... ;)

Pretty movingly written, I hope your friend Anthony is okay... Quite a few times there's a "your" when it should be "you're", and paragraphs would make it easier to read, ...