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  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Literature Re: White and Gold

    Hi, I may be rather biased in my review because I love the original story of Echo and Narcissus but I really liked this poem. You used many of the ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Script » Realistic, General Re: The India Of my Dream

    I thought it was good. I have a few nitpicks such as using both an ampersand symbol and the word "and" as well as a few grammatical and punctuation errors. ...

    Jul 12, 2016


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien