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Hmmmm... It seems like most of them liked it. Did I? Well... Okay... I did. But, honestly. I wouldn't want to lie. I found this a little like every other ...

Unable to understand. I'm in a fix. I don't understand what this meant. Did she die? Is she alive? Was she swallowed by the waves and killed? Drowned... I didn't ...

Hi there... I'm sorry to tell you this. But, I have already read a story like this one already. It was a published copy. But, I liked your version too. ...

It was short but it gave me thrills. I really like the fact that it started and ended quite soon and was able to narrate a vague though not the ...

Hi there... I'm Nida. And before I review, a piece of advice. Your a writer and what makes you good is firmness. I did see a lot of firmness in ...

It is nice piece. If you are a philosophical person I'm sure you'd love it. But,I think that you can make it more poem like since when I read it ...

Hiiii! I don't regret reading this but I've found it so full.. I see your point. And i wont talk about your views cuz i respect the emotions set in ...

Hey! It was nice reading it though i see the problem is that it was way to long with no motion in the happenings.. You've added a lot of sense ...

There seems to be a little of you in it! A little too subjective in brief.. But the flow is great! I did have a feeling that is quite common ...

Heyy! It is for the first thing.. Very Very creative! You have done a good job there.. But if you provided with a little better reasoning would make it much ...

Hey! This was a really nice creative piece! When its fiction its enough that it is appealin.. It is not exactly important to make complete sense and i mean it ...

Very nice.. Beautiful.. N heart fillin! There is a spark in ur narration! It is touchy though.. I dunno how but i found a kinda hype.. I support writers way ...

Hey! Very nice.. N touchy if u know what is exactly the person would be experiencin! It is real wonderful n i think that u should try to elaborate it ...

Hey! Nice work! You seem to have somethin very deep in mind n u had a little trouble explainin! Though nice thinkin! As the previous critic said.. Grammer is quiet ...

Hey! This is a nice little prologue we ca say.. Since things r quite fast runnin but thats not exactly bad! There has been a little injustice to the mother's ...