90skids

I know how you feel. I don't even notice that I'm doing it until I tun it through EditMinion

thank you so much for taking the time to read and review it :)

thank you :) I'm still figuring out what's going to happen next but i'll upload it when I do

thanks for the review Percy :)

thank you so much :) I tend to write my dialogue in coffee shops or use lines from real conversations. I find it really helps to make it 'natural'

thank you so much for reading it :)

thank you for another brilliant review :)

no it's perfectly true. They are snobbish :)

Thank you so much for your lovely review :) the characters of the women at the start are based on my mother but you're right, I don't think killed is ...

I've written the next chapter but I don't have enough points to add it yet. Do you have any ideas about what I should do next?

thank you for reading it :)

thank you :)

thank you so much for reading it :)

thank you for reviewing it :)

thank you for the review :) I'm sorry that I get a bit comma-happy as I write more and more :)