7whitewolf7

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Hello! I'm here to edit your story :) I'll be using these () around my suggestions so you can see where it is in your story, I'll begin! ;) My ...

You've already made the edits I'd say you need to make, you use repetitive structure very well, and diversify it at the same time! "heavenly bliss" soaring glee" both describe ...

I feel this could very well personify how a 'devil' might feel if you ever write about one. :) This is a very meaningful poem that has a lot to ...

Keep it exactly the way it is. :) That is all I have to say. On this fine sunlit day. For this that speaks to us kids. (Thumbs up!)

:0 ....... I'm saving this to my *Favorite Poems folder. You did this excellently, And I love the title you picked for the piece. Please submit more poetry!!!!!!