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thank you so much for the review! If i'm honest, i wasn't really sure about the ending other than I knew I wanted Cecelia to be dead the whole time, ...

I wasn't actually planning on writing any more but I might since I've got some ideas now!

You're welcome! it was a beautiful piece, my old english teacher would have loved you aha, she very much liked descriptive writing which is probably why i used to do ...

Thank you so much for the review! And for your suggestions, they really help :-)

no problem, and that's great that you're doing better! :-)

Thank you so much! And yes I've been meaning to put their thoughts in italics, I always forget when writing aha

Thank you so much! The reason the narration shifts a bit is because it was originally meant to all be Ian this time but I didn't like it changed it ...

thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot

Thank you so much! i will look into your suggestions!

Thank you so much! Your feedback is much appreciated :-)

Thank you so much! It means a lot, and thank you for correcting my mistake XD

Thank you so much for the review! It means a lot :-) As for 'twenty two going on forty,' i meant that she's twenty two, but she looks like she ...

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That's alright, I've actually changed the ending and carried on the story so that it makes more sense, I'll upload that sometime soon

Thank you so much! It was meant to be that her body was under the bed and this whole time she and ian had been ghosts, but I wasn't sure ...