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Thank you again, but i'll be blunt as well: this was really upsetting to read. I know I asked you to review and honestly I am so grateful that you've ...

Thank you again for the review, it was really helpful. Though there are some things you critique that I disagree with - I guess we just prefer different styles aha ...

Ahhh thank you so much for this, it's honestly been so helpful. Obviously this is only a first draft so I haven't yet gone through and edited/re-worded it, I'm just ...

No problem, I'm actually going to go and read the previous chapters now!

No problem, and thank you for writing it and giving me motivation!

Ah I'm glad you agree aha, I always get worried that when I post reviews I'll upset someone! I'm probably going to go and read all the other chapters of ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! This feedback has been particularly helpful, as I always make my sentences too long and never realise aha! And yes, they are both girls ...

No problem, and I do hope you are inspired to write some more!

Thank you so much for this review, it is honestly so helpful as everything you said has helped me to improve my work! I'll try and explain some things aha. ...

Thank you so much for the feedback, it was actually incredibly useful and I'm grateful :-)

Thank you so much! The criticism is honestly so helpful, as this was the first SCP story I have written. I mainly just redacted the names and places because I ...

Thank you!

Oh, and I'm English so we spell it "Recognised" with an s :-)

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate you correcting all my typos! It really means a lot :-) If I'm honest, I'm not too sure whether it ...

Thank you so much!