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Re: The Boy Who Cried Love
:shock: This poem is absolutely brilliant. I was drawn in by such a clever title, the boy who cried love. It could easily get published. I can't even find anything ...
Oct 16, 2005 -
Re: Scarlett Fever
I think it's worth going on, definately. The description in this is excelent, but you have to make it a little clearer as to what is exactly happening. It's something ...
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: One-Legged Sailor, Mack Marret
These were great. Yeah, they were dead funny... I like the second one the best, great job. You should definately post some of your fantasy stories, I'm sure they're brilliant, ...
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: Onomatopoeia
Hey, this made me laugh, it was cool. It didn't make any sense but it was still really cool... Liked how you used all the different beams, tell your friends ...
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: Freedom
Yeah, I definately think you have quality, this was really good. It sounds horrible, actually makes me feel really sorry fot the prisoners even though I know it's fictional. What ...
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: Even stars must fall
Hi, I really enjoyed this, it was brilliant, I liked how you changed from the ordinary scene to the fantasy one. It makes me wonder when and how the two ...
Oct 7, 2005
