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Re: Rice
I like how you had a wonderful ending an he got what he wanted rice. I like your hook but i wonder if you could decribe it more.I also like ...
Mar 28, 2016 - Re: Rice Mar 28, 2016
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Re: Finding A Friend
Nice organization of paragraphs!
Mar 1, 2016 - Re: Finding A Friend Mar 1, 2016
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Re: Chinese story
Nice character name and title name!
Mar 1, 2016