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Re: Warriors: Rise - Allegiances and Prologue
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Wed Sep 27, 2017 8:25 pm
I like this one just as much as the other. I have many of the same things to say about this one as I did for the first chapter. Oh ... -
Re: Warriors: Rise - Chapter 1
Oh there's a prologue! i will go read that maybe this will make more sense then
Wed Sep 27, 2017 8:21 pm -
Re: Plea to the Divine
I really enjoied this poem. I always enjoy poems stories anything with a good ending, and I really liked how you wraped up this ending. It was very good. I ...
Mon Jun 19, 2017 1:44 pm -
Re: I have had the word 'realist' hurled at me
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Mon Jun 19, 2017 1:37 pm
Wow! That is an amazing poem. It was very enjoyable to read. I can tell you are very good at writing poetry. I am not so I am in awe ... -
Re: Quest to Kolob Chapter 1 Part 1
Thanks for the review! It was really helpful. The tense at the start used to second person, but I tried to quickly change it becuase I want to finish the ...
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Re: My Biggest Fear
Oops, I don't know what just happened. Sorry about that.
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Re: My Biggest Fear
Wow, wow ,wow! That was awesome. It's one of those poems, sotroies, moments, in life when everything else is tuned out. I really liked how you kept going on with ...
Wed Jun 14, 2017 5:04 pm -
Re: Papyrus's Spaghetti (An Undertale Parody)
That's a really good parady
Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:00 pm -
Re: Chapter 1
I really liked it! Just sometimes it seemed like you went off on little rants about little things here or that inturuptted the flow of the story. And maybe you ...
Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:44 pm