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Hi just 2951302 dropping in for a friendly review!!! I never would have imagined that I would read a poem about a potato that is this beautiful. its so simple ...

Hi, this is just 2951302 dropping in for a friendly review! this poem is amazing!!!!!!!! This poem was written with such good vocabulary, and like Nightingale06 says this poem is ...

I really enjoyed reading this. My first question is: is this the first chapter of a book? If so I feel like you might have jumped into this too fast. ...

I reeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaally liked this poem. I've always found it difficult to write rhyming poetry, but you killed it. the only thing is your grammar, ( I'm awful with grammar so ...

I love how you express yourself so much in such a short poem. I really liked this poem except for this line: "Stumble and fall A queasy flight" i feel ...