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Thank you for your review, suggestions, and time. Thank you for your encouragement! I actually have not written much poetry at all, in fact, this is the first (and at ...

Thank you for your review, suggestions, and time. Thank you for pointing out how the effect of the first section was taken away from the rest.

This is a beautiful poem. I love how he sees the light and love in a girl who has been through so much pain and so much darkness. This is ...

A very short, sweet, and to the point poem. Like many works of Poetry, there are some opposites. This well describes first love, albeit first love is rarely successful. Overall, ...