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Thanks for the comment!

Thanks, I really appreciate the review!!!!

Thank you!!!

Thank you so much!!

Thanks, I'll definitely separate the lines into stanzas!!

Thank you so much!

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Wow, this was really interesting. I think it's cool that you wrote in second person, which is pretty rare for short stories. The imagery is amazing as well, with lines ...

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Wow, this was really interesting. I think it's cool that you wrote in second person, which is pretty rare for short stories. The imagery is amazing as well, with lines ...

Thank you for the review, I didn't even notice that! I really appreciate the suggestions!!!

That's exactly what's happening, I'm glad that that came across. Thank you for the feedback!

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback!!

I honestly just started writing this as a rant because I couldn't think of anything to write, so it definitely helped. Thanks for the praise!!

Thanks, I%u2019ll keep that in mind:)

Thanks!