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When i read the title and the description i thought it was a funny story. After i read the whole thing i was actually impressed even tho it's not that ...

Pretty good there was lots of intense stuff that wanted you to keep reading. I think it need a little more of her thinking about her surroundings. I'm pretty impressed ...

This story is very good and interesting. I would change the title but other that that it is great. Their is lot of excitement. Once you start reading it's pretty ...

It seems that it's only about his thoughts I think you should say a little more about his surroundings of what he is doing in the beginning. I think the ...