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I said "The sun rises down" to kinda emphasize the point that they're not what they seem to be

Looking good, I like how you described love in such detail, and comparing it to a dance. The streamers were a nice touch too. Gold star

I can take a critique, but I was just aiming to see how the audience interpreted it. A mirror is symbolism for imagination and also truth, so a house of ...

If I elaborated on the story, you wouldn't get the same feel. The problem with being a peer editor/reviewer of poetry and other works which try to convey emotion is ...

I didn't really make a point clear enough that they're ghosts.

I should have used the word false.. I meant to just describe how nature's path is... well it's natural... And society, it's kinda manmade

Wow. I wonder what what the note said? Was it a suicide note? Was it a love note? You're killing me here! I think it was a love note

Thanks for the positive feedback

I like to take things from a neutral viewpoint. I take neither side but simply state the facts of what is happening. Society is a conflict with nature