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For a practice, this is quite good! It flows well and I really look forward to reading the full thing in the future. Though try to add more depth into ...

Hey! I'm gonna be reviewing your song today (sorry if it's terrible, I'm new to this :) ) Firstly, I really like the flow of this song. I'm not a ...

I really love this poem, and it really hit me hard in the heart. There are a few typos, but I'm sure they're not deliberate mistakes ;) Your poem actually ...

This is really good, i love the imagination in it. I would love to see it as a longer story, put into more detail on these worlds and the story ...

I really love the theme of this poem, and I think you did a great job with it. The rhythm was good and the whole thing flowed really nicely. I ...

hey Lyds. Love this poem, it's really sad and written really well :D You need to write some more baby girl!! And it needs to flow a little better (though ...