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This poem is so true! I mean, how many times are people really sorry for what they've done? "Sorry" means you won't do it again. Sorry has just become a ...

I'm not oneto drag things out, so I'm going to get right to the point. Your story was epic, and if you didn't win the contest already, you have a ...

That was probaly one of the saddest stories I've ever read. I love how you used a lot of similies to describe what was happening. I'm assuming that the girl ...

You're story was very good. I found one mistake: "I screamed. Lunging at the sheath strapped to Zeldrene's hip, I slipped his knife out and tossed it like a javelin. ...

I don't think it was bad at all. It's very good considering it was your first poem. The lines flow well and you were able to keep up the rhyme ...

This poem was so creepy, but in a good way. I love the dark message and how, at least this is how I preceived it, there is an underlying story ...