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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Anne Rice's vampires

    Thank you soooo much, I was ordering them today and hahah I wasn't sure about it. =]

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Samuel

    Wow. This poem is really touching. It's sad though. I'm sorry this happened to you.. I liked the way your words flowed. Good job! -Kat =]

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: High School Students

    Hmm. As everyone else said, this piece isn't quite poetic. I can see the point you are trying to get across. Perhaps if you add in a bit of imagery, ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stupid Mistake

    Wow! Good one. I really like the way you wrote the poem. At first I was a little unsure, but after reading it a second time I realized that it ...

    Apr 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: blinkk.

    Awh I loved this poem! It was simply amazing. Maybe break the poem into different paragraphs. Other than that it was great, keep writing poems like this one. =]

    Apr 8, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: [deleted]

    I enjoyed Uglies, but the ones after it were not as good. Though Pretties and Specials were not so bad, I can't really say I liked Extra's.

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Rose Madder, Stephen King

    So this book was pretty good? Was it scary at all? I'm looking for a good scary book and I can't seem to find one. I read The Talisman and ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Children of Power

    Wow. I really liked this one. I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes. The one thing though was that it was one HUGE block of writing. Maybe divide it ...

    Apr 7, 2008


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