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Here I am again! :) The laughter that followed sounded hollow and vaguely unreal. Nishant looked away; he knew that she was only displaying half of her true form, but ...

I read this part of your prologue (I realize it's not the whole thing) and I'll tell you what I think about it. :) “Quickly, in here.” Silvani shoved her ...

It's not often that I read a poem I actually like, but I liked this. It flows very nicely and I like the imagery. I agree with God that it's ...

I'm not really sure whether I liked this or not. It was very short and especially in the beginning a bit confusing. I'll point out a couple of things I ...

Hey there! I read your chapter as I said I would and will now tell you what I thought of it. :) Since WaterVyper already took care of most of ...

I was looking through the pieces in Other Fiction and I noticed nobody had reviewed this piece yet. I think you did quite well considering the length of it. But ...

I rather liked it. There wasn't very much going on, but it was interesting enough to finish reading. WaterVyper already pointed out some small mistakes, so I won't repeat those, ...

So, here's my first review on YWS.. ^-^ I really liked this story, in fact I'm a very shy person and haven't reviewed any other stories yet because of that, ...