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Re: Her
Yeah Jordan you have so many grammar mistakes I wonder why you're top set school
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Her
ok it's got lots of grammatic mistakes, for example when you are writing in first person it was supposed to be capital 'I' and don't do capital 'S' when you ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Horrid Henry - Part 1
I meant competition not prize
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: School Trip part 2
No you person you said paralysed is spelt wrong? Well it isn't, 'paralyse' is the English spelling and probably you are in USA but they have much better in England
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Daydreams
It doesn't really rhyme, but if it wasn't meant to, you could have just said
May 16, 2008 -
Re: School Trip
Ok but where shall I continue the story?
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Heartbreak (deleted)
I agree with everyone else and it was a bit good, but somehow I didn't like it. :S
May 13, 2008 -
Re: New Book
it was a really good start of a story. I would like to read more. :lol:
May 9, 2008 -
Re: I hate...
You didn't use I hate in every line. Apart from that, it was okay.
Feb 1, 2008