*singerofthenight*

Actually, I was referring to two diferent races. Literally. Like Asian, Caucasion, African american...but in this Case African and Caucasion. Your right about the fire...it'll sizzle....

Please, kep it coming, but I think I saw a few spelling misstakes....

yeah, i know, i forgot the rest of it at home. ITs actually pretty long.

I didn't really like this. I suppose you have potential with this story, and I know it's supposed to be a cliche high school romance, but I've seen this dialogue ...

O_O *bursts out laughing* LOL That WAS SO FUNNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Srsly? Hey wait a minute....your makign fun of Twilight! *points accusing finger at writers* Oh was FUNNY! toodles, jen!

O_O. Wow. *Stares at Aust.* *starts to clap* That was beauttiful and I must say, very creative choice of words. Keep up the good work! Chao, Jen,

OMG! Hurry up with the rest. I'm practically sitting on the edge of my seat right now. (as you can see). !

ok, please don't say anymore. i think you just blew it for me. I wanted to read it for myself. hey haev you read breakign dawn?

Thanks. Yeah I sotra misspelled some words and I am planning to fix that. Like I said this is just a prologue and I'm still editing it. I just need ...

O_O. Wow. I can say nothing more. The one thing I noticed was that you didn't really....hmmm.....you didn't really care how long it was. It felt like it just flowed ...

awww...I didn't know you wrote poetry.... :smt058

ok thanks i redited it. :D

re-edited. chapter 1 will be comign along shortly.

omg! are you gay? that poem was so freking good, i9t made me believe you were.

yoo hoo!