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Sorry guys...this is just when I was starting out and I forgot to fix it! :(

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the advice! Chapter 3 is headed your way....and newly edited Chapter 1 and 2.....I'm still workign on the prologue though! :P

Please! Pm me with you get teh next chapter!!!!!

ignore this and read the post below....

It's fine. I said I needed some much needed critical review on this particualr book I'm working on. I do need to edit it and I'm in the process of ...

Wow. I have nothing else to say. I'm going ot be gone over teh next efw weeks and I won't be able to get on, but I'm goign to print ...

Very good. I was basically on the edge of my seat. Kepp it comign. Liek I said before, this has some serious potenial to it.

Newly edited!

Thanks guys, I do plan on continueing this. I'm workign on the prologue right now, but I'm going to take a few things out and add different things. If you ...

I'm not sure but I think this needs to be moved to science-fiction? or it can stay here. :) Please critique. I'm submitting this book for publishing....:) *puppy eyes*

yeah i told you i was going ot post teh rest.