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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kiss Me In The Dark: Prologue

    This was great, suspenseful and fun to read because I felt like I was there and involved which made it all the more exciting to read. Apart from what Enigma ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: hitman

    Hiya, Robin! Coco here to review, hope that's ok? Firstly, welcome to YWS! Secondly, I was totally drawn to read this by the title - Hitman - it could only ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathon Stroud

    Bartimaeus was a character that was just so refreshing to read. I mean, it was really clever, witty, and the way he bonded with Kitty was just really sweet. My ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: HELP!!! please... :)

    Hiya, Sophie! Coco here, hopefully I can help. All writer's are different. I'm the kind of writer who jumps with the very first idea I get and the very first ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kiss Me In The Dark: Chapter One

    Hiya, Emmylou! I'm Coco, and I'll be giving you your first review, hope that's ok :) Let's start off with what I loved about this. It made me smile, I ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hiya, Jackle! Coco here! So, I think I read the chapters in random order but anyway here I am. I totally got engrossed in the plot and completely forgot to ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Forever Summer

    Oh, I loved this, it was super cute and made me smile :D I love the way you write - short and sweet, not too much and not too little ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey Jackle! Apologies for being so late. I loved this :D It's like me and cupcakes, I just can't get enough of it. Your character's are great, the dialogue is ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Guardian- chapter 2

    Hi, Skeen! Coco here! Summer had once again arrived in the town of Ashford, the streams flowed full, and the vast amounts of crop which filled the fields grew taller ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: One Thousand One Maidens: Part 2

    Hey, Chasmira, it's Coco again :D This is really dark, isn't it? But, that's what I love - dark and gritty - they are two things that make for a ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: One Thousand One Maidens: Part 1

    Hey, Chasmira! Coco here! So, I have to say I absolutely loved this, in fact, I'm surprised it's taken me this long to discover this piece. I loved the wonderful ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Three

    Hey! Coco here, as requested :) Sorry this was so late! JoJo hesitated before going into her next class, science. It was her favorite class [repetition of class - try ...

    Jul 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Party - chapter seven - edited

    Hiya, Ofir! Coco here, as requested! I hadn't missed much, or so Alex kept repeating. They just told us exactly who we were going to teach and when – they ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Am sorry

    Hi, Spy! Thanks for your request. Although I don't review poems, I'll make yours an exception, but bare in mind that just as your mother tongue isn't english, my fortay ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Pygmalion

    Hi, Jetpack! Thanks a bunch for requesting a review (and yes, I do remember you reviewing Of Loss and Love - I've been awol rewriting that story - check it ...

    Jul 10, 2010


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