*DaughteroftheMoon*

Thanks for your review Demeter. I get what you mean, I didn't notice that before. I'll be sure to change it up.

I actually wrote this for little kids in fact. It's for the YMCA Gymnastics. Thanks for the reviews, and the time you all took to read them.

Thanks for the review Sofi, although, I didn't capitilize and put in grammar on purpose. Its one of those poems without the grammar. Thanks again for taking the time to ...

It is actually, to Icarius and his son. You're the first one to notice. :)

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Haha, I don't think that this is exactly radio material. Thanks for the reviews though.

Thanks or your review! Yeah, I see that they are a bit to straightfoward in some places. I'll try to edit it out...when I ever get time. :)

Thank you for the review! I was wondering if anyone would ever review it. I see what you mean and I'll fix it right up. :)

Thanks Galerius, I can always count on you for a good and honest review.