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Really great, I love this. I was 15 I visited a boy It was a bit hard to realize thta she visited a boy that lived there, so i would ...

Hello. The man stood up and walked toward her. Pandora wrapped her self tightly in the unfamiliar blanket. The man stared at her with a it of a smile. Her ...

Yeah, so I’d just wished that I didn’t have to ride the school bus. I didn’t want it to happen like this! I’d rather sit on the school bus than ...

This story is amazing. I can't wait to read more about it. there arguments Wouldn't this be "their"? It makes me sad because they always have me hopeful, I mean ...

Brilliant. I really love this. You have such great talent, and I'm not even kidding :elephant: . (But your awesome-er than the dancing-purple-elephant) Keep writing!!!!!!!

Once again, I really like this, but I think it is short. You did really good this time, getting us into Leila's head. The picture of Ella and Allen, embracing ...

I really, really like this. I will totally be looking for the rest of it. You are a great writer, but there is only one thing that I want to ...

I like this alot. I think your style of writing is really unique, and that the story is very different--everything from the idea to the way it's written. A few ...

I really, really like this. No joke, it is one of my most favorites. There is only one eeensy weensy thing that is bugging me (but a lot of random ...

Heyy!! So I really, really like this. I love the way you write (your writing style, I guess) I totally love this, but there are a few things i want ...