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Re: Koylyn's Story Part 2
Nice! I like that there are two shows you that this is like another reality. I was pretty confused during the part where the Cap'n was stopping people. I didn't ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Spring Magic
I don't know if this was sent already or not, since I messed something up. I'm not exactly an expert on computers! But I'll start again. I liked your poem, ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: Koylyn's Story EDITED!!!!!
okey dokey, well i really like the story line, but it could still use some work. there are lots of little mistakes that i'm not gonna bother w/, but i ...
Jan 15, 2009
